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Tuesday, 23 September 2014

Cross Country Run


Last  Tuesday  on September the  11 PT  England  School  had  their cross country  run.   We had   to go and  wait patiently at the court  in the  hot sun  “ I felt like I “was going to melt into  a  puddle, of   breeze hot butter .


Just  before we could start the  races I think that  my team  was the  BEST !    out  of all  the teams   cheer. I looked across the assembly and saw my team leader  my team leader   run up to the  front and started to cheer up my team  .  


Heard the starting clap  so  I  bolted off the line.I hard  my  family  cheer me on as I was in my race so I   will  win the race.  


At the End of my race I  felt so hot and  I felt like a champion .  

Thursday, 11 September 2014

Goldilocks and the three bears

I have been learning to write complete sentences, add details, and change the beginnings of my sentences. This is a story about Goldilocks. I have not finished it yet but this is what I have done so far.












One  beautiful summers day there

was a girl  little called Goldilocks.  her  mother  told her not to go away because she might get lost. This is her story .


One day my mother called me and  said do  not go away before you might  get  lost . But I didin’t   want to listen  to my mother  so I  decided to go and play 
on swing  my swing . Then suddenly  I saw a rabbit  the rabbit  look at me and  it started to run so I chase   after the rabbit into the    Suddenly   I  notion's that  I  was lost.  Then I  saw  a house  and  I run to the house  and when   . I so stop at house said  ’’Hello   is anyone home’’ . I wait but no one  answered  so I look through the wino douse  but I did in ’t see anyone so I decided that  I.

Wednesday, 10 September 2014

Wednesday, 3 September 2014