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Thursday 9 June 2016

narrative

WALT : write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)
This week I have been learning how to draw A picture
One day a little boy and his friends went to the beach.There name’s were Ben  David  and .The beach they went to was Pt England beach.Ben Ran in first then David  then Mat.Mat doesn't really like going into the beach water but he have to so he just ran in.Then Ben  thought he was a good swimmer but the surf water took him and he started to drown.Then  and Mat was worried about Ben  because they couldn't see him around.Suddenly They heard someone saying HELP HELP.Then They listened one more time then they knew it was Ben .But they couldn't do anything to help because he was out far and probably he will drown said Mat.The Mat and David  heard nothing but just the water moving around and around.Then some how a hero out of the sky dived through the water.He grabbed Ben  and Took him back on to the beach.Then they said thank you Superhero then Hyper wave said That's All right that's my job to save people and protect the world.Then Ben woke up and he said thank you very much Mr Lee  .Then he said no worry .So then he left and that's the ending  of my story HOPE YOU ENJOY .

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